Friday, December 11, 2009

A Guide For The Wedding Dance Mount And Blade What Should Be The Title Of This Poem? Should I Share It With The One I Intended It For?

What should be the title of this poem? Should i share it with the one i intended it for? - a guide for the wedding dance mount and blade

A Moment My Love
October 26.2006

A Time to my love, for a moment, my love
I could see from afar in their wedding dance
A small smile escaped my lips
with the deep desire of regret
But anyway, I feel comfort when I
The undeniable radiant joy on his face.

A certain sadness spread
When the storm that I set aside
However, in an effort to forget the past
Unscrolls future ahead of me very quickly
"Uh moment, my love, for a moment, my love"
That's all I want to ask.

Behind the message of the song you danced
It is a consolation for another soul will never
You have a better person if I have let you go
For a while, but find the way
The first time he should. Remain

So go ahead and dance my love,
I will see in the distance, and keep, not a bad way
I run a light in the darkness on your steps
I will always be there, on mortality and infinity
LifeUltimately, it will always be not to be missed
Moved even thrown Quiet Storm
You and I, our souls ... not two.

"Once, my dear, that's all
You are not far from me, not all
What a moment compared to eternity?
When you're done dancing and
Do you have your way back to me.

7 comments:

pair-a-d... said...

It is a beautiful poem. Can you call it "a moment". My thoughts to your question is that if you send or give your intention, it would be to their emotional pain. If you really do like it, do not want. Your pain is their feeling, and well deserved. There may be an act of love for his subject, but. It can be a time in the future, if such an offer could be useful to come, but not yet. Set consists of free, they send their deepest desires love, sorrow and accept that sometimes the price of love.

i love my sister said...

Our Souls Are ONE !!!!! That is all.

Lee L said...

the last 3 states s backwards.i we stand a better person if I have let you go. a time to find the way to where they initially thought he was staying. I always say that for mortality and the infinite always friend, I love you, and then say again, when you are finished, their dance and find their way back to my .. So let it go. right? Then you say, with a series of mortality'm a friend who has always right to mature and then say, go live your life forever and when your dancing does not feel any respect for themselves and never even, its shape the suspension. so your answer is the correct action of a person who knows nothing. Solid say it to keep in your heart and write her new ...... climbing the same distance is the one who is below ...... humm not sure whether to release them into a better person, "A Time to Dance"-tracks ... .................. Lee met me

cris lance said...

Dance with me, my love

elizabeth k said...

A Time My Love, of his title. ... I would say that unless you and this person are together again, would be a bad idea to share with them. If you are really happy, just because you love to be happy, you should not interfere. good luck with that.

synchron... said...

Keep your life ... write a poem to go on a piece of paper, get out of you, pray for the people interested to be happy, then burn it!

martin h said...

"Wedding Dance" or "I will be seeing a lot"

While giving him / her, is pretty good.

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